Greetings, fisfall ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

I'll admit I had to look up a word or two. But then... I learned that tue` means person killed. How sad!

You followed the prompt nicely.

I always enjoy the flow to your poet words. I must say, however, bonbon threw me off a bit as I instantly thought of candy.

I loved the lines:

I went off to college, you went off to war.
Gone were the happy nonchalant days, I
wish were here once more

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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