Greetings, {suser:as***a}! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

Nice work following the prompt. Cute story, too.

I would have to write the address down, for sure, lol. Great dialogue.

I loved the line:
"Hai khoda, Did she shrink somehow?"

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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