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Sweet Gummy Wishes  [E]
Be careful what you wish for
by Geoff
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, Geoff

In our life we wishes many thing. If our wish is realistic one day our wish will come true. Expecting too much is hardly get fulfilled our wish. So we should always wish something that would be real.

I like the lines
Those that are deep, hard to understand.
The wish givers are very particular,

Mina.

simply positive group.
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