Review number #4 of week April16-22nd

Hi Jacquie

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Acts of Redemption

First Impression: Very smooth flow.

What I liked: Remember that one kind word is all it takes. Amen, that is so true. Kindness is so important to each of us.

What needs your attention: the first line a true medicine is laughter. it heals, and... I would switch it to and it heals to keep with your rhyming scheme that is visually apparent in the rest of the poem.

Favorite Parts: Precious moments will be kept in one's sights. As you age, the precious moments in our lives are the small stuff that we took the time to notice. We learn to appreciate each and every one with each day more than we did in our youth.

Overall Impression: Beautiful imagery, rhyming is overall very good. Good luck with the rest of the month.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .