Review number # 5 of week April 16-22nd

Hi Carly,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Trolls,

First Impression: As I read, my first thought was Carly met my ex-husband, he was mean like that.

What I liked: The images created with the authors word choices.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: Toothless grins, made me chuckle. I hate seeing people's gums when they forget to put their teeth in. I bet a troll would look worse.

Overall Impression: Amusing free verse about trolls. One of my favorite books to read as a child was 3 Billy Goats Gruff and the mean troll under the bridge.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .