Review number # 6 of week April 16-22nd

Hi Sharon,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: So Much Unsaid

First Impression: I hate war, I hate what it does to everyone involved.

What I liked: I felt like I was with the soldier remembering all the things I wished I had said, too!

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: Lying wounded and hearing the shots whiz overhead. My mind was filled with so many powerful images knowing how the man must have felt knowing this was the end. His wife would never know how very much she meant to him because it was unsaid.

Overall Impression: Excellent reminder how precious everyday should be to each of us. We never know when life will change, even if we are not in a war.

Thank you for paying tribute to the young men and women who put their lives on the line for us all.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .