Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Sadness is the major emotional pull here.
No such thing as perfect, therefore you are not useless.
That's imagery that elicits this response to your last lines.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is rough in keeping with the wrinkled paper theme.
Pace is slow, and detail filled.
No visible misspellings hamper this piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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