Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

You had me all the way and I never expected the punch line at the end. Bravo! You tell a tale well, and the reader is caught up in the emotion of fear and trepidation that comes with some horrible visage a girl sees everywhere.
Form and structure are foundational.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically no visible misspellings are evident.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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