Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-15-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Both scenes seem scary to me.
I read the criteria in the previous newsletter and was not able to come up with anything, but you did well in both cases.
Form and structure were efficient.
Flow was smooth and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is fast and senses shattering, as the emotions flow through with the force of a storm.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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