Hello there, L. A. Powell
This is a Simply Positive Review!
Oh, my goodness, this poem really reached my heart and spirit in a haunting way.
This poem describes such a profound love that spills over line after line, making each verse more enriching. The ending had the emotions twisting and turning, for I could see the grassy earth and below and perhaps the memory of love, forever locked in her heart until they join again.
The rhythm was smooth and the words well chosen for impact on the reader. It was a free verse poem, which I am quite fond of.
I see no place that needs attention because the poem itself grabbed my attention and kept it until the last line.
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