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This is a very short story. I bet you are still working on it, since I found no reference to any cats. To me, it feels like the story has just began. If this is the case, you might want to Edit the Access option to: Keep PRIVATE: For my eyes only. Then when you are finished, you can open it back up to where you have it now.

What I like about this so far, is it's about a girl who is not noticed by her mother, who is too busy reading a book. Kaylee's slumped shoulders say a lot about her. She will do her best to survive another awful day at school. So now you've left us wondering... What's going to happen next? Where do the cats come in? And why is she called "The Crazy Cat Girl?"

Your spelling looks great! You did leave out a word, however... her mom ignored ... I'm guessing there should be another her...her mom ignored her.

You have a good enough beginning here to continue on. I hope you do!

Favorite line...

Her shoulders slumped a little, but she tried to keep her head high.

Great visual!

Nice start!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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