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Hello Jess,

this is another wonderful poem! It's rather ironic since the subject of the poem is about trying to write when the words won't come out, yet in writing on the inability to write you have managed to show your abilities as a writer and craft an awesome poem! As usual you write with an incredible ear for how the words sound together. I love the internal rhymes in this poem and it's a great one to read aloud. Nice use of alliteration too! I also love how you've incorporated physical terms for parts of the brain into the poem (nerve fibres / synapses).

Very impressive!


Much love and best wishes,
Mark xx


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