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 FUN AT THE FUND RAISER  [13+]
A chance meeting leads to afternoon delight
by fisfall
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello fisfall

This is a delightfully light-hearted little poem about a chance encounter. I love the wordplay with fun & fund in your title. The poem itself flows smoothly. I notice this is written for a contest. I wish you well with it. I presume the words you highlight in bold are prompt words for the contest, and you've used them very creatively.

Didn't spot any errors and really enjoyed reading this.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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