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Hello Elle - on hiatus

As a chronic procrastinator, I was drawn to this poem by your description. Your title is very apt. The poem flows beautifully with some very good imagery. You have a good ear for how words sound together and I think this would be a good poem to read aloud. You use alliteration to excellent effect. You have a particularly strong ending to the poem and I love the hopeful tone. I couldn't find any errors, and really enjoyed reading this so have no hesitation in giving a full five stars.

Best wishes,
Mark


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