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 An Eternal Bad Boy Of Contention  [18+]
True love is hard, and when it goes bad all types of ideas and feelings come through.
by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! ,


I just read your poem "An Eternal Bad Boy Of Contention" , which I found when I hit the random review button.

Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.

Hopefully you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Overall Impressions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

A dark look at hard love through the eyes of an eternal bad boy.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Conventions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

Free verse poem written almost in Blitz Form  . Reads like a blitz poem and feels right when read fast like one.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Suggestions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

None



*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Favorite Parts: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

It just us and these trees
Around your neck
My hands
Throttled
In your eyes
Pain and fear
Over what if


The poem starts to get darker here and I like dark. Plus its just good imagery here.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*Additional Comments:*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

Nice dark poem, keep on writing!

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*



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