I just read your poem "Invalid Item" , which I found when I clicked the random review link.

Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.

Hopefully you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


Overall Impressions:

The passion of a true love triangle. Who says there can't be as much between three people?

Conventions:

A sonnet written with perfect meter without making the poem feel clunky or forced. Your rhymes were nice and neat.

Suggestions:

None


Favorite Parts:



I know a few polygamous married triples, and it does take an immense amount of trust and love to carry on a dance such as this. But it's no less valuable than a relationship between two. SO this stanza range true to me and was very passionate all in one.

Additional Comments:

A fun poem about something not considered norm. THanks for keeping this up to share!

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