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 | The Necessary Cat  [E] This came to me whilst watching my darling orphaned kitten, Anouk.  |
| (4.5)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    HI Jazzycat! I am here with a review to celebrate you!   Purrrr! This poem is a Purrrrrfect tribute to the lure and power of a cat! I had to smile and nod as I have had this experience.  It was absolutely a pleasure to read aloud and flowed smoothly. The rhyming was well done and added to the drama. Your description of the cat antics and your responses are vivid as you recount the tale in a consistent voice. I like that you are speaking to the cat as if it can understand. Well, it likely does and knows exactly what it is doing. Your first verse drew me in and I enjoyed the language and word order. My favourite to read for its vibrant description and tone. The comparison to a queen is well borne out through out the poem. Verse 4 is fun telling of your useless resistance. Resistance is futile I'm thinking.  Well said!The last line is emphatic just by adding the comma. The word "cat" so plain and firm, still trying to distance self from ownership. It works. The title reflects well the theme. Thanks for creating this entertaining and "truthful" tale of a necessary cat!  Well written.Happy 10th!   Light on the path as you write on!!eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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