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 | Thoughts on November Snow  [E] snow in the first half of November leads to gloomy thoughts  |
| (4.5)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    HI iluvhorses! I am here with a review to celebrate you!  What a vivid reflection on November's first snow. The idea of making it prophetic is appealing. The vibe of the piece gives me the impression nothing is ready for winter yet. Vivid words like "icy fingers" "flee" and "grasp" create the chilling reality and reaction to the surprise. I love the idea in the first line--the personification of night stretching its fingers. Beautiful. The enjambment is appealing here too as I think of a winter night stretching longer than summer's and then you surprise with the next line. Brilliant.  I enjoyed the sound and flow as I read it aloud and it is effective how you left it hanging---evoking our images of what that might be!  Simply written with room for readers to imagine. Thanks for sharing your craft and vision. I am glad it is spring.  Happy 4th! Light on the path as you write on!! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 06/12/2015 @ 11:11pm EDT