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 |  | Black Spider  [E] I hate spiders!!!!  |
| (4.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    HI purpleflame! I am here with a review to celebrate you!  I am with you on the Spider front! Creepy yet creators of magic! But keep them away from me!  Your title caught my attention with its simplicity and directness. Might as well face the topic right up front!  I enjoyed your encounter with a spider and could so relate, especially to their ability to get away just when you think you have them under control. LOL I don't like heights either so kudos for you getting up on a ladder. I would have used a fly swatter, but so can relate to the kleenex ritual.  I had to a laugh when the kids left and then came back to step on it and thanked you! I shuddered with you when it landed on you. The comic relief of the spider man comment was effective too.The first line set the scene though I felt it could be broken up into shorter pieces. It was long to read.. I also notice some places where commas would help. You will probably catch them on an edit. It is interesting , don't ya think what you will do for your kids. I would kill a spider if someone else was freaking out worse than me--but I want someone else to do it FOR ME . Thanks for the trip!  Light on the path as you write on!! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/15/2015 @ 7:00am EDT