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 | The Quiet  [18+] The strength of the mind is exceeded only by fragility.  |
| (4.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    HI Spirit duchess! Happy 5th ! I am here with a review to celebrate you!  This reflection lured me with its unique vision and free flow that feels like mind and muse weaving through ethers. Many of the concepts and images evoke me to ponder as well on the mirror , reality and consciousness and the madness of the mind chatter. I loved reading it. The reference to Alice is potent and the work had that kind of quirky quality!  I liked "some truth must gnaw" and "lured to the eye" and the idea of "crazy diamond". Verse 6 has lovely soundscape. Verse 5 confused me. "leave what to the imagination"--felt like something was missing.  The use of nature images is effective and I could visualize the sun and lake and how a profound vision and reflection would arise. The last two lines have a potent edge of finality. Wonderful though sad. I thought of a legend in his own mind.! Thanks for sharing this original and unique vision. I appreciated the evocation to see with your eyes and will ponder on.  Light on the path as you write on!! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 06/18/2015 @ 7:24am EDT