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 WHERE'S THE BEEF ?  [13+]
A meat eater is taken to a vegetarian restaurant
by fisfall
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, fisfall ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week! *Bigsmile*

Your prompt is to write about a meat-eater who visits such a restaurant (due to the insistence of his/her vegetarian friend.)

*Reading* I enjoyed this. It made me smile, especially the last two lines, lol. *Laugh*

If he don't like that
I guess we're through


*Check4* You followed the prompt nicely.

*Starfishp* I love your title: WHERE'S THE BEEF? *Bigsmile* And your humor. Great job! *Smile*

*Thumbsupr* My favorite lines:

I thought he meant they cooked great steaks
not meatless meatballs for heaven sakes


*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*


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