Greetings, invisibleman! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" ! Prompt: Your prompt is to write about a meat-eater who visits such a restaurant (due to the insistence of his/her vegetarian friend.) Good job following prompt. Very upbeat! I was nodding my head and tapping my foot to the tempo, lol. I liked it a lot. Ugh... I can imagine how my stomach would feel after all that wheat and beans... I think I'll stick to burgers, too, but on a wheatless bun... with French fries. I especially loved the line: "Err... waiter? I'm ready for my burger now." Good job! Best of luck in the contest! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ") My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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