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*Tulipp* Greetings, invisibleman! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week!

Prompt: Your prompt is to write about a meat-eater who visits such a restaurant (due to the insistence of his/her vegetarian friend.)

*Check3* Good job following prompt. *Bigsmile*

*Reading* Very upbeat! I was nodding my head and tapping my foot to the tempo, lol. *Laugh* I liked it a lot.

*Starfishp* Ugh... I can imagine how my stomach would feel after all that wheat and beans... *Laugh* *Pthb* I think I'll stick to burgers, too, but on a wheatless bun... with French fries. *Rolleyes*

*Thumbsupr* I especially loved the line:

"Err... waiter? I'm ready for my burger now."

*Eat* Good job! *Glass3*

*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*


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