Greetings, brom21 ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

Prompt: A lipogram is a sentence deliberately avoiding one or more specified letters of the alphabet. Write a story or poem without using any words with the letter e.

Stanza 2, Line 7 - saved me

You did a nice job with this. It's not easy trying to write something without the letter e.

An emotional, heartfelt piece. Nice flow...

I especially liked following lines:

I was as a man that holds
a frail soul,
so limp and at odds
with all the world

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")




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