Greetings, Jacky ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

Prompt: A lipogram is a sentence deliberately avoiding one or more specified letters of the alphabet. Write a story or poem without using any words with the letter e.

I did find one word with the letter e. In your third paragraph, second sentence, you used the word Suddenly. Don't feel bad, though... you weren't the only entrant who overlooked an e.

I liked your moral. It's true, too. If you don't ask, you might not ever find out.

I also liked the situation you displayed. Many of us can connect to similar feelings.

The following sentences were my favorite because they describe how obsession can affect a person:

Orian could not think past Lindal’s charms. At night, his mind would twist and turn trying to find a way, not allowing him to drift.

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .