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 A few Haiku  [E]
After a beautiful spring day, I tried some Haiku.
by Sophy
Review of A few Haiku  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, I just read this beautiful poem. After a long winter spring comes and nature looks like a canvas on the earth. The picture you painted here make me reading this. Though short but the words are wonderful. "Robins" "rabbits" "green grass" all the natural elements blended together makes a lively spring picture. I like the word of this haiku. I like the lines

rabbits feast on garden fare
while the green grass grows.

Mina.




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