Review number # 3 of week May 14-20th

Hi Northernwrites

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: When Fragments Run Afoul of Grammar

First Impression:The title got my attention and I learned a lot.

What I liked: The explanations were clear and precise. I didn't sit and wonder what is the author saying, it made sense to me.

What needs your attention: Nothing, this was very informative and enjoyable to read.

Favorite Parts: Poetry that leaves me wondering what when I get to the end, it's nice to know it isn't just me. I am not fond of poems built on fragments, grammar makes a huge difference in poetry to me.

Overall Impression: I am a poet, and I search for new tools for craft box all the time. Ted Kooser's book sounds like a worthy investment. Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .