Review number #4 of week May 14-20th

Hi Flower,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Shower

First Impression: A deep sigh because I taken similar showers cleansing myself too!

What I liked: How easily the words flowed line to line, it was like taking a shower with you as I read.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it is a powerful poem.

Favorite Parts: This was no ordinary shower, the connection the reader makes here with the author is powerful. I am survivor, I know what it feels like when you finally say no more. The feeling is terrifying and exhilarating all at once.

Overall Impression: I hope other women read you poem, no one should live as a victim ever.

I hope you consider joining my group,

GROUP

Love Shouldn't Hurt  (18+) This group's goal is to help others find their voices and stop violence. Silence enables. #2040412 by Lyn's a sly fox

and entering your poem in the contest that is running until June 5th

FORUM

Love Shouldn't Hurt Poetry Contest  (GC) 1st Poetry Contest raising awareness about abuse. Next round is May 5th-June 5th #2040807 by Lyn's a sly fox

.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .