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The Rainbow Weeps  [E]
To Nelson Mandela
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review of The Rainbow Weeps  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating ,



I just read your poem "The Rainbow Weeps" , which I found when I hit random review.

Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.

Hopefully you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


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Nelson Mandela was a rainbow of peace and equality and losing him will definitely be a great scar on this nation.

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Free verse poem

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The rainbow weeps
for the Father of his Nation
who struggled
to make a difference.


He did indeed struggle as should we all to make a difference.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*Additional Comments:*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

Thanks for sharing your work!

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*



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