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Review of The Lost Song  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello Crys-not really here ,



I just read your poem "Invalid Item" , which I found when I hit random review.

Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review off my own personal interpretation of your work and don't feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within. I consider myself a forever student and sometimes simply enjoy exploring new poetic devices I have learned when I notice them.

Hopefully you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Overall Impressions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

Aww what a great short poem on the loss of love and the ache it leaves inside of us.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Conventions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

free verse poem, no specific rhyme or meter. Metaphor used beautifully.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Suggestions: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

sooth = soothe



*Starbl**Moon**Starbl* Favorite Parts: *Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

I can't pick a favorite part, each description is described wonderfully and any part taken out would ruin the poem. It fits together flawlessly.


*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*Additional Comments:*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*

Thanks for leaving this piece up, it's beautiful.

*Starbl**Moon**Starbl*





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