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 walk  [13+]
it just came to me
by Tamzin Morton
Review of walk  
Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi, I just read this poem. Our life is full of obstacles and stress. But we have to admit it. In your poem you are using many good words specially the lines where you are telling "Walk till your feet bleed and your legs can go no more". Yes, we should keep walking with hope. Hope is the light on our pathway. Only hope can keeps us alive.
Your poem is very inspiritional. Thanks for sharing with us.

Mina.





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