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 I've come undone   [E]
My life was filled with heart ache and bliss
by DawnDiva
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello!


Hi, I just read this poem of yours. Human mind is very mysterious. Sometimes bright and sometimes filled with dark clouds. "my heart you stole" In this line you express your feelings so deeply. I like the word of your poem. I like the lines
Like quicksand,
My thoughts transcend,
Slowly,


These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Mina.





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