Review number # 2 of week June 18th-24th

Hi Smee, How's your anniversary so far?

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive and "Game of Thrones"  .



Title: Floating

First Impression: I've been tempted more than once to toss a bottle with a note but then I consider all the trash already in the ocean and it breaks my heart. I have to start trying these contest entries, I've read a few now in the Games, every topic encouraged such great reads.

What I liked: The bottle's thoughts along the journey were amusing to read. I chuckled when I read all of us like to do what we are good at, yes it is so easy to stay within our comfort zone. It was fun to travel with the bottle out of his comfort zone and to reach a new destination.

What needs your attention: After the paragraph Why do I float and before I don't know why I float you have a t sitting all by itself.

Favorite Parts: The adventure with the bird and how it felt dangling by the orange feet and the feeling of helplessness when the bottle fell. What an exhilarating feeling to free fall, the details were great.

Overall Impression: Creative and enjoyable read from the beginning to the environmental happy ending. You are a excellent story teller, I am impressed with the entries I chose.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!

What does the fox say? Great story, Smee!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .