Review number # 6 of week June 18th-24th

Hi Fyn

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive and "Game of Thrones" .



Title: Lilac Time

First Impression: I smiled to see the poem in a lovely purple shade centered on the page. I would be tempted to add a cover of lilacs.

What I liked: Lilacs hanging like bunches of grapes, made me think of my childhood yard. We had lilac bushes a long the edge of our house, when the windows were open they filled the rooms with intoxicating aromas.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the images and word choices in this 10 syllable structured poem flows very smoothly when read out loud.

Favorite Parts:The elderly couple resting together on the bench enjoying the heady aroma from the lilacs, conversation is not necessary, the simple gesture says so much more.

Overall Impression: This poem invited the reader to linger and enjoy the lilacs with the elderly couple. The image of the wizened branches said the garden is not new along the garden paths. I have the feeling this is something they created together. Thank you for reminding me how special sitting together in a beloved garden together can be.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my Immense pleasure!
Lyn

What does the fox say? Awesome!



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .