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 | Alien Invasion  [13+] Another entry for the Amazing 55 Word Story Contest  |
| (5.0)    Hail Bumblegrum! I am from the House of Martell come to take you...er do a review!   Oh my gosh! You have quite a sense of humour and can spin a tale about anything! I burst out laughing at the end of this as it was unexpected after the very serious exploits that came before. Of course, the dialect at the start got a smile as into the sci-fi realm you took me and set the stage. The second incident of the speech struck me even funnier but the aliens were quite serious and the language you use helped give that impression. Where-ever did you think up those words? Baby talking aliens. LOL In 55 words you give the complete story right down to the intention of the aliens. The words like "galactic" etc built the sci-fi theme and even the font was an effective choice. I liked the word "declaimed" as it is not an expected one. The tone was factual . The twist at the end was marvelous. I like the descriptive word for the dog and using the scientific terms suited your story. Well done! You truly have a gift for these 55 word shorts. You know how to twist and see a funny side. I really appreciate your sharing your obvious joy of writing these and for the gift of laughter today. You rock!  Those alien words could be a great dance number.   Light on the path as you write on!  A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Eyestar ** Image ID #1919873 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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