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| (4.5)   "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello there, blue jellybaby This is a Simply Positive Review!  I found your item highlighted in "One Writer's Favorites!" .   I swear I had no idea what was in store for me while I started reading through this story.   figured it would be something quite benign having to do with the "public inconveniences." You know, the oops, I forgot to check the seat was up following cleaning and I fell through the hole, kind of normal toilet mishaps.   This one however, took a quick spin and a corkscrew turn pulling the reader out of comedy mode and into terror-toilet to hell mode! Observation: "When I say something, it was something painful." I think this sentence is stated a little awkwardly. Try: [When I say something, I mean something painful.]  I think it's clearer and has more emphasis.   Okay, back to the story ...It had teeth?!!! I know this is going to haunt me for a while. To think it took me years to be able to take a shower alone, without deep fear, following the movie "Psycho." Now, I have to watch where I sit in public, so-to-speak. Gee thanks a lot, Joanne! Well done.  Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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