After having read your first story , I decided to browse through your port and I found this. I have to say that I thought it was the real story of your wife and you (I am curious, right?). And you really scared me when I read crack dens and the smell of the people you killed. Up until then I thought it was real. Then, at the killing-people part and even after that, with the HIV and the almost beating heart in your hands, I laughed at myself. It is the second time that I got tricked by your titles, and I think it shows that you have a unique way of writing.
Besides laughing almost through the whole story, this beginning line was my favorite. When I still thought it was true. "we were married in a beautiful service behind the bookstore next to the dumpsters. It was the happiest time in my life."
Keep writing. It would be nice to read a longer story of yours.