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by A Guest Visitor
Review of “The End”  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Ah every authors hoped for demise.
Doing what he/she loves with their last breath.
Reading like a song; nay a eulogy.
Perfectly penned with a rhyme scheme that lends to that smooth flow.
Pace is slow and sensory filled. The sparrows struck this readers attention.
Grammatically clean as a whistle!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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