Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Bravo!
Well done!
You have put pride in it's place.
As Paul said "I shall boast in nothing but in Jesus{paraphrased).
Your rhyme scheme is impeccable and lends such a natural flow to the piece.
The emotional tags are apparent, and the reader espies them in each stanza.
The structure is standard and enhanced by the symmetry of your stanzas.
Pace is slow and almost like a waltz. Swaying to-and-fro, as the lines lead.
Grammatically snafu free no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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