Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What a senses filled piece.
It's really a wonderful picture of your life up to then, and the past events that brought you through the years.
Form is a bit rough but nothing is lost in this pre-birthday reverie.
Flow is not lost by the paragraph spacing, and the pace is slow as the scene comes into view and the reader is mesmerized by your crystal clear depiction.
Grammatically snafu free, I'd love to give you a thirty-three.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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