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Feed the Pheasants  [E]
My pastor's chickens made another appearance in his sermon, and it got me thinking...
by ~MM~
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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Yep the parable of the sower is a good verse indeed.
The point is well taken, we have to leave the four walls behind and seed the fields we have at our disposal.
Form and structure are appropriate.
Flow is a bit slow.
Pace is slow too, and rightly so.
Grammatically speaking, no visible snafu's peek out over the grass you lay down in your piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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