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Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi! My name is Cubby and I will be providing you with feedback today. As part of my raid from Team Florent, I am reviewing "Invalid Item" 

*Sun* What I really liked about this: OH MY GOSH, lol! This is great! What a catchy limerick, and you have done a wonderful job with it. I absolutely love limericks, and this one is right up there towards the top. It's funny, witty, a little bit naughty, and your rhyme and meter are fantastic. I even like the layout (appearance} of it centered and double-spaced, along with the larger sized and colored font. I even liked your item description under the title, lol. Great work!

*Clouds* You might want to consider: Lol, I really don't have one suggestion. Unless it's to send this in to a Viagra agency or corporation, or whatever it's called, and maybe they'd use it in a commercial around St. Patrick's Day. *Laugh* Now wouldn't that be cute: A leprechaun at Niagara Falls with a partner... Hmm... I'm stopping right there with this train of thought!

*Starb* Final thoughts... Adding this to the last two items I recently reviewed, I'd say I thoroughly enjoyed visiting/raiding your port. Nice work, Andrew! Oh... and one more thing I noticed about your writing. This reader, at least, can feel the love of this craft in your words. I hope you never lose that!

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*

Cubby ")

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