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10 Days of Spring Fantasy Contest Book  [E]
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by Nixie
         Review for entry/chapter: "The Fairy Truth ~ Day 2" 
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A very interesting read! It's been a long time since I read a fantasy item that involved fairies and fairies are my favourite so it was a nice read! The title of your story is what attracted me as I Wanted to know what kind of truth was it, all kind of possibilities swarmed in the reader's mind and to avoid my head from bursting from them, I came here to read about it *Laugh*.

The beginning of your story is strong as you make the reader wonder if this is a fictional or a non-fictional story. Home and assignments are one thing all students agree on, they shouldn't be given! *Facepalm*. I could relate to the frustration Portia was feeling, even though I am a first-second position student, I still sometimes say that I would prefer to get an F but in the end, I always ended up doing the assignment.

The truth about the fairies which you presented in your story was very unique, I would have never thought of it this way and you made the reader explore an alternate option. It gives an impression to the reader that they are like humans, they can be kind, returning the favour but at the same time, they might have bad intentions. Excellent!

The flow of your story was good, there was no interruption The format was god, there was proper paragraphing and it was easy to read and understand. My favourite part was the ending which made me laugh.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK!
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