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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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The beginning of your poem is really interesting as you make the reader see a fallen rose from your perspective. Roses used to grow in my home, still do, and I can relate the feeling, most of the people do not give a lot of attention to the fallen roses because they think they are futile, not beautiful anymore but they have their significance in their own way, beauty in them.

The second stanza of your poem brought a scene of graveyard in my mind where a loved one has left a rose on the grave of their beloved. It really touched me. The repetition of the lines 'a fallen rose is no less precious' was a good addition and then in the last stanza, it was a good element to change it and it was very beautiful when you mentioned it is all the more and the last line was just beautiful! *Heart* *Sun* I did not expect that at all.

The flow of your poem good, there was no interruption, the pace was good, it wasn't too fast neither too slow. The vocabulary you used added to the flow and the rhythm. My favourite part of your poem was the beginning which made the reader think that there is more to a broken or a fallen rose, beautiful title and a beautiful poem!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK!
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