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A Time For Healing  [E]
Written for prompt in Coloring the World contest
by ~WhoMe???~
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP"  review! Hope you are enjoying your port raid! *Bigsmile*

A beautiful poem about redemption and changing yourself. It made me feel very happy and satisfied at the end and it was motivating, encouraging me to take your advice and learn from you and add change to my life as well, heal, let others heal, make everyone happy, enjoy the times we have.

the beginning of your poem, the first two stanzas, were beautifully written! I could relate to them as they reminded me of the things we have done that caused harm and hurt others, both intentionally and unintentionally. But that time has passed now and no one can change it no matter how much they want to. This is life, once a decision has been made, an action done, it can never be changed, but we can only hope to do better in life. That is what shapes us as a person and we are the result of the choices we have made in the past.

The rest of the poem gives a feeling of hope to the reader that not all is lost and there is still something we can do, accept who we are and live life to the fullest! *Heart*

The flow of your poem was good, I particularly enjoyed your rhyming scheme that enhanced both the flow and the rhythm in your poem, amazing! *Stary* I just had one suggestion for your poem.

==>Filled with laughter filled with tears
Filled with laughter[,] filled with tears

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK!
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