Review of {bitem1738015:}

Hello,Riot

I'm Bikerider and I am reviewing your item for "King's Landing updating "  I hope you find my comments helpful.




I've seen many items titled, Dear Me, but this is the first one I have read. I've seen the contest over the years but have never written for it. Looking at your Dear Me letter, I'm glad I stopped to read.

I don't think the normal perspective usually used for short stories apply here. So I will use comments to explain how I feel about your letter.

First; I have given this prose a five star rating. There are two reasons for this. I think you did a great job of explaining your goals, personal and otherwise, but also because it deserves the highest rating possible.




None. The Dear Me letter reveals your inner feelings and thoughts, therefore I wouldn't dream of suggesting anything.




I found your Dear Me letter to be well organized, revealing, and well written.

I found it interesting that you wrote about infertility. I don't know why, but I always viewed the dear me as meaning writing goals. But that is obviously not the case, and I think you handled it well. In the opening paragraph, you show the things that are most important to you in your writing. But you soon get around to the thing that is most important, most personal, and the thing that gives you the most disappointment and hope. And you did it well.

In closing this review let me say that I hope your year required that you prepare a nursery. I truly hope it all worked out the way you have hoped.

This is the first Dear Me letter I've ever written, and it will be how I judge all other Dear Me letters I might read.

With best regards;

Bikerider

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