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Greetings from House Florent, "King's Landing updating " !

Hi! My name is Cubby&Hubby~WeddingAnniversary and I will be providing you with feedback today.

*Castle* Thank you for submitting your entry in the "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . *Bigsmile*

*Sun* What I really liked about this: I especially like your first stanza. It's perfect! The description of the place of your dreams. It has everything, right? *Rolleyes* To be honest, before I read the prompt, I did not know caveat emptor meant buyer beware. It's good to know now, I'd say. Anyways, that first stanza is my favorite. Its meter, rhyme, flow, everything about it is great! Plus you've set the reader up for what's to come. *Wink*

*Clouds* You might want to consider: My only suggestion would be to balance out your meter so most of your lines fall into a rhythmic pattern. Some lines have extending beats that are obvious. Sometimes the reader can reread a line and make it work, but there are a few lines here where the reader cannot. Other than that, I loved it! *Heart*

*Starb* Final thoughts... It was priced right, too... Who could ask for more? Buyer Beware!!! If it's too good to be true, most likely it's too good to be true. I want a great deal like everyone else. Sometimes I think we talk ourselves into thinking it's a great deal, when it works out that it's not. Great job portraying the prompt Caveat emptor. *Smile*

Good luck in the contest.

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*

Cubby ")

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