Review of

Earning It All  (E) A hair-stylist gets a loan #335621 by Joy

Hello,Joy

I'm Bikerider and I am reviewing your item for "King's Landing updating " 






As a retired police officer, I have to say that this is a wholly authentic story. Unscrupulous lawyers can set up a problem for someone, only to request they represent the 'aggrieved' person. What the lawyer does when he solicits the client, while not a crime, is a violation of the Bar.




Simple errors with simple fixes:

You Wrote: His eyes were [for] searching someone or something inside the bank.

You Wrote: "Mike, he's out[side] again. What should I do?

You Wrote: A [The] tough woman that she was, she wouldn't let the sight of a straw hat get the best of her.




There was a scam similar to this but on a larger scale. A person would agree to be the victim in a car accident. A car would tailgate the 'victim' and then hit him. The 'innocent vicitm' who was hurt in the accident would be represented by the lawyer who was participating in the scam. When the insurance company paid, the victim, the attorney and the second driver would share in the award. Some people didn't think a case like this should be given any priority because in their eyes there was no victim. But since it created an environment where we all pay higher car insurance premiums, we were all the true victims.

This is an interesting take on something that is real. You did a good job explaining how it all comes about. Good job.

Keep writing.

Bikerider

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