Review of

THE CURSE OF.....  (E) Woody Allen and me... getting zapped... #224827 by Joy

Hello,Joy

I'm Bikerider and I am reviewing your item for "King's Landing updating "  I hope you find my comments helpful.




I liked the way you came up with how Woody Allen got his name changed from Allen Stewart Konigsberg, to his present name. I also liked the way you used lightning as the prop for the humor used here. Humor in writing is difficult to accomplish, but you did a good job with it in this story.

These are a couple of the places I especially liked:

His lawyer helped him win his name back. Now his legal name became Heywood Allen. Hey Woody, what do you expect if a lawyer helps you! What I liked best about this was the way you took a humorous jab at lawyers without using one of those old, tired jokes we've all heard.





I saw no grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors in this story.




Most celebrities don't use their real names, mostly because this helps them keep their lives anonymous. I have often wondered how some of those celebrities decided on the names they've used as they became famous. At least in the case of Woody Allen, you have cleared up my curiosity.

As an aside, I came very close to being hit by lightning during the year I spent in Vietnam. The lightning struck a metal garbage can sitting about 15 feet from where I stood. Too close for comfort.

Since I also live in Florida, the lightning strike capitol of the world, I can appreciate the humor in mentioning the elections. Will we ever live that down?

Good job with this story.

Keep writing.

Bikerider

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