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 Lights Out  [13+]
A GP gets fed up with his time wasting patient.
by pamela
Review of Lights Out  
Review by abbyer
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello, Pamela.
This is a review for "Lights out".


*Dropb* Wow, it is a dark piece you wrote! But it is the third story of yours I am reading, so I must get used to being surprised by you. You managed to write one more gripping story, with enough information underneath the title to make it even more interesting. It is the story of a doctor who decides to play angel of mercy, or rather, to play avenger, not out of pity but out of frustration.


*Dropg* The doctor, at first, comes out as a considerate, hard working person who tries as best as he can to take care of his patients. A man who can put things into their right proportions, understand where he is needed and where he is not. So, this righteous man gets upset when he feels used and turns into a killer for those of his patients that seem or are hypochondriacs. He feels good about it, too, with no regrets.


*Dropy* His transformation happens when he cannot help a favorite patient of his, realizing that the whole "helping" experience is in vain. Of course, there is the danger of making this kind of behavior seem justified, right or normal, which it isn't.And not many doctors, if any, would think to act in a way like this. But, hey, this is fiction and well-written. So,


Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
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