Another beautiful poem from you, again with the reference of stars and sky which you seem to love. It is romantic, emotional and full of beautiful images. It is a poem about a lost love and how our dreams can be broken just by the hand of a loved person.
I liked the presentation of the poem too, the short lines that seem desperate and unable to hold more words. My favorite phrase was "scar shaped memories". At first I thought it was 'star shaped' but then "scar shaped" made a lot more sense and made the whole image more powerful and dramatic.
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
You responded to this review 07/01/2015 @ 2:20am EDT
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